This is really good
I like this song a lot...it really has that dark feeling and a tune that gets stuck in your head.... the only thing i didn't like was that you gave everything away too fast. In the the 8th measure you gave everything away like you had everything come in so you had to make some desperate moves in order to keep it from being repetitive. But other than that it was a really good song..... you just gave everything away too quickly.....nice job love the song.